This the third completed song that I wrote during the year! Wow! Getting inspiration for songs is usually rather hard for me so… Anyway, enjoy!
Verse 1:
A brush of the hand
A push on the shoulder
A quick stolen smile
What’s best to end this day?
Chorus:
No one shall know
If you wish it.
A secret kiss
Before we let go.
Verse 2:
Interlocking fingers
Head on the chest
Your face close to mine
What’s more to dream about?
Chorus:
No one shall know
If you wish it.
A secret kiss
Before we let go.
I’ll catch your arm
You turn around
A secret kiss
Before we go home.
Bridge:
A rainbow over us
We laugh for no reason
Stay silent
And feel our presence
Chorus:
No one shall know
If you wish it.
A secret kiss
Before we let go.
I held your hand
You hold my world.
A secret kiss
Before we go home.
An Evil Nymph.
I was just thinking how the lyrics in rap and hip hop undermine the idea of love and the refined components of love. Lyrics that talk about slamming a bitch up against the wall and doing her doggy style.
Thank you for this beautiful sublime song. It gives me hope that some people still believe in love and the higher components of love.
Don’t worry, there are still people like that! Thanks!
This is beautifully well written.
Love brings hope to the world.
🙂
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Thank you so much! Indeed!
Thanks for sharing 🙂
You’re welcome!
Oh, I love it, Daph… I even made up some music to go with it…. Too cute.. 🙂
Aww that’s great! Thanks!
Beautiful, hun! Will you be making a recording of you singing this? 😉 Would love to know what it sounds like!
Thanks! Well when I write a song I don’t always have a melody with it… for this one I have one for the chorus only 😛 Usually I write by a rhythm of words, that’s how I make songs. So nope no singing… or maybe later later? hihi we never know what my ambitious mind is preparing for me… xP
Haha, okay, well if you ever get inspired to sing I’d love to hear it 🙂
Cafe…it needs no sound…it is a poem
Hmmmm …. You need to post a video with it. 😀 Anyway, very interesting. Will look forward for more of your creations.
Haha I’ll need to find a complete melody for it first! Thank you ^^
Nice work …. and i will wait for the music 😀
Thanks! All right lol
Love the lyrics, beautiful as they are now. Still I would really like to hear the song set to music and performed they way you think it should be. I think it could be a favourite
Thank you! Hehe let me find the complete melody then…
Very well written… 🙂
Thanks 🙂
Beautiful. A melody of secret kisses 🙂
Thank you ^^
What a sophisticated poem. 😉
Thanks!
Beautiful words. The joys of love and it’s many exciting surprises!
Aww thank you! And thanks for coming by 🙂
This is just awesome. Great!
Thank you!!
This song is so sweet. 🙂 You should try your hand at writing more songs.
Thank you 🙂